If I could tear this digital list into shreds I would. This is lazy writing.
Ever seen someone who feels dejected? A kid perhaps who was declined a date to the dance? THIS is what you write down, not the word. The word is a shortcut to telling. Showing what the character looks like or how he acts is in my mind better writing.
Don’t make it easy on yourself. Don’t subscribe to these lists. Your writing will appreciate it.
(Source: artandalcohol)